#1
take a bow mr. apocalypse i think u deserve the applause
but alas it ain't over the people still demand an encore
take your guns, take your knives, hide the children, hide the wives
cause the creature is here everything will disappear from your eyes

is it time to celebrate or hide
when our creation assembles & comes alive?
never mind the hype, just put it aside
cause ignorance turned ugly now run for your lives!

will you laugh in the presence of the world falling down on you?
say hello to the end, see every promise you made come true
look alive, close your eyes, do your best to stay alive
fall in line, one & all, take a seat & enjoy the ride

is it time to celebrate or hide
when our creation assembles & comes alive
never mind the hype, just put it aside
cause ignorance turned ugly now run for your lives!

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that's pretty much all i got so far. i think i might add a bridge in there somewhere but i just posted the song here to see what u guys think of it.
#2
I like it. Songs about laughing in the face of death= win.. My only criticism is that you use the same rhyming words throughout:

hide
alive
live
ride
aside
eyes
wives