#2
dude
thats an awesome intro
great way to start an album
i must ask, can i halp write some of these 9 songs?
this looks to be great from such knowledged writing
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#3
nicely written, i really liked the use of the harpsichord, had a great bass line. the one thing i could suggest to improve it would be to slow down the tempo before the end chord, other than that it worked really well as an intro, looking forward to seeing the rest of it.

if you wouldn't mind having a look at mine?

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=791178
#4
Great opener indeed. It would be really cool to have som random spoken things in the mix during this. Once you have a lyrical theme for the album ofcourse Some sample could be added aswell depending on the theme. Let's say it about war you could add gunfire, marching, stuff like that.

Crit one of mine?