#1
A piece I wrote about 30 minutes ago. If you cant tell classic rock style playing, No ideas for names, just want some improvement feedback, thanks. c4c


Im as new as was Elvis
With less shaking pelvis
And the great Bob Dylan
With a little more thrillin
Like Mr Mojo Risin
But more hypnotizin


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head


Theres Jimi Hendrix
Always ripping licks
And Steve ray Vaughn
Who never made me yawn
But it was Duane Allman
Who gave me my callin


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head


Listening to The Byrds
Just eating there words
Creedence Clearwater Revival
With a great, good time style
And of course the Fab Four
Who first opened the door


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head
#2
pretty sweet. i would rearrange it though it kinda jumps and doesnt read smooth the first time.