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A piece I wrote about 30 minutes ago. If you cant tell classic rock style playing, No ideas for names, just want some improvement feedback, thanks. c4c


Im as new as was Elvis
With less shaking pelvis
And the great Bob Dylan
With a little more thrillin
Like Mr Mojo Risin
But more hypnotizin


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head


Theres Jimi Hendrix
Always ripping licks
And Steve ray Vaughn
Who never made me yawn
But it was Duane Allman
Who gave me my callin


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head


Listening to The Byrds
Just eating there words
Creedence Clearwater Revival
With a great, good time style
And of course the Fab Four
Who first opened the door


The name is Kyle
Though some call me red
Im one you can not file
So far out of my head
Counting lightyear miles
Cause I have fed my head
#2
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what's so hard to get?

Quote by RULES

Thread Titles.
Two things and two things only should be in your thread title; the name of your piece, and a genre, where applicable. No other symbols or attention seeking devices are permitted - This includes capitalisation too. Your thread will just be closed if you do. Do not beg for a critique or say ‘C4C’ (Crit for Crit) either, or it will be closed. Smileys also are not permitted. HTML does not work in titles either, don’t try it, it will be closed. If you can't think of a title, 'Untitled' will suffice.
In addition to this you can put "unfinished" alongside your title, for any work that is incomplete, I stress just "unfinished". The only other permitted extras in your title is O.T.S. (On the spot).



I seriously doubt your piece is named "rock legends tribute kinda?"

if it's untitled just name it untitled. Thank you.