Vocals are absolutely horrible, but the whole idea of reworking a beautiful ambient bjork song into a grunge version is interesting, but it needs to work better. Maybe a better drumbeat?
yeah, I'm gonna seriously rework the vox (I agree, they sound terrible).

Personally I quite like the drumbeat. The original had a very simple 'dum-dum-Dum-dum' beat which I was trying to emulate. But meh. Plenty to be cracking on with.
That's Fruity Loops isn't it? Sounds pretty cheesy.

Got to agree the vocals are horrendous.

Sorry pal.