#2
Not much to crit here , It's really catchy, I liked some parts of the bass line, maybe add some more leads? (I know it's a punk song but who cares) Anyway good job.

C4C? (new one in sig) Thanks.
Last edited by rodrigomierh at Feb 22, 2008,
#3
that was pretty nice, really catchy.

c4c in sig.
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#4
Very catchy, reminded me Blink 182 a lot. I didn't like the bass at bar 23, and where ever else that part is. Other than that little part, the bass is really good. I really liked what I'm guessing was the bridge. You should add a lot more guitar leads, rhythm gets boring after a while; still a good, fun, catchy song though.

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