nbgreat
Never Been Great
Join date: Sep 2007
295 IQ
#1
I thought of posting my first compo. It's called "The Glass and the Mirror: Light of the Shattered Sun". I plan this to be an 14+ min epic and I've completed the whole song but i can't find it in my computer . Anyway, I think it wasn't still good so I reworked on it and i've completed the 1st part which is an overture. It includes a MIDI file, GP5 and GP4 files. Hope you like it! Enjoy!

UPDATE: I've completed the 2nd to 4th movement of the song and it now clocks at exactly 11 mins weird . I still have to add some vocals so it'll take a few days before i finish the whole epic. Enjoy the updated version!
Attachments:
The Glass and The Mirror - Light of the Shattered Sun.zip
The Glass and The Mirror - Light of the Shattered Sun ver.2.zip
Last edited by nbgreat at Feb 23, 2008,
trashbeast
Uhh. Stratocasters
Join date: Feb 2008
234 IQ
#2
I think it's great. this is the first song you've ever written?

what are your inspirations?
nbgreat
Never Been Great
Join date: Sep 2007
295 IQ
#3
Yup it's my first . Dream theater especially overture 1928. I based the song's structure to overture.
Ceresz
Wannabe
Join date: Apr 2006
60 IQ
#4
Awesome song. Just what I want to hear Can't wait to hear the whole epic!
9.5/10

Crit mine one of mine (in the signature)?
Last edited by Ceresz at Feb 20, 2008,
trashbeast
Uhh. Stratocasters
Join date: Feb 2008
234 IQ
#5
Quote by nbgreat
Yup it's my first . Dream theater especially overture 1928. I based the song's structure to overture.

I thought i heard some dream theater there. still - sounds good, i've been writing stuff for like 2 years and i havn't written anything as complete and flowing as this yet :lol: