#1
i had a couple of riffs in my head, nothing real organized though,
improvised it through in one take and this is how it sounds
songs in my profile under acoustic
comments are welcomed
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#2
i really liked the song man...you managed to keep it sounding interesting despite just an acoustic guitar which i struggle with lol... if you got a sec you should check out the new acoustic recording i put up...its just a work in progress but i need some advice
#3
man that intro is bomb it has a great sound good work
the other part isnt bad but it just doesnt feel to me like it really fits the other part of the song b/c they each give off a different feel. i feel that the fast tempo at the end would work better if u used that the whole time.

and you should come check out my music and tell me what u think
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/fatmanman/