#2
I don't really like the vocal pattern but the double-tracked stereo vocals sound cool! I think it's a simple song which doesn't need to be overcomplicated, so I wouldn't worry about repeating yourself. The biggest single thing that could improve it would simply be using mic'd acoustic guitar - rather than what sounds like an undersaddle piezo? At the moment the guitar's just a lifeless droning in the background with no dynamics or warmth, it's a shame really...