I just started working on it a few mins ago, this is what I have done so far. Click my profile and listen to "new song".

Lemme know what you think.
Wrong forum.

But to avoid being a dick - It's ok and shows promise, I like the backing guitar, but I think you played it really sloppy.
There is poetry in despair.
yeah i know i played it sloppy. I did both the guitars in 1 take cuz I was in a hurry