Check out my new song "Train Wreck" on my profile. The music is written by myself and the lyrics of the first verse and chorus are taken from the song "Train Wreck" by Jeen O'Brien. C4C plz.
First off, I like the guitar. Its muffy because your recording set up is blahhh but besides that its good. It sounds like a Goo Goo dolls progression, not sure why. The voice, I have absolutely no idea what your saying. Maybe because it isnt english, or because your microphone setup..Regardless, invest in buying some new equipment, its worth it.

crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=793317
Don't worry mate, it's on the list. As for the vocals, because I'm not using a mic, the guitar kinda muffles them. Oh well...Glad you like it.