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Hey.
I wrote this song about a week ago and just wanted everyones opinions on the lyrics. Constructive criticism is welcomed .
Its very Oasis-like in its structure and the way the guitars are played.
Here we are:

Top to bottom,
I ain't got enough hours.
Top to bottom
No, not enough hours.
Gotta turn my life around.
Gotta turn my life around.

(Main guitar riff)

Top to bottom
All my days, too short.
Top to bottom,
Yeah, the days' too short.
Gotta make my changes.
Gotta make my changes.

CHORUS:
She says she loves me,
And I believe her.
She says she wants me,
And I believe her.

(Main Guitar Riff)

Top to bottom,
Need room for time.
Top to bottom,
Oooh, room for time.
Turn the clocks for me.
Turn the clocks for me.

(Main Guitar Riff)

Top to bottom,
No room to breathe.
Top to bottom,
Need room to breathe.
Change the schedule please.
Change the schedule please.

(CHORUS)
(Guitar Solo)

OUTRO:
Top to bottom.
Top to bottom.
Top to bottom.
Top to bottom.


There we go . Comments?