#2
Thanks for the crit

Nice tone on it. I liked the electric piano at the start.

Sounds like something from a movie soundtrack. That is not bad, but for a stand-alone song, it was a bit boring.

More instruments or tracks would kind of ruin the feel of it so... If I were to suggest anything, it would be to repeat things less. Ya know, deviate more.
#3
there is quite a bit of signal noise at the beginning and there are some pops you want to get rid of. the depth of your effect seems too high from 40 to 1:15 it seesaws a lot and makes my ears feel sick. nice ambient feel to the track though, composition was fine as was the playing, keep it up
Guitars-
krozka-sharpe raider session 'revo'
ibanez s520ex with SD TB-10 full shred bridge
ibanez sz520qm
epiphone les paul custom
epiphone EJ200

Amp-
Orange tiny terror with PPC112 cab