Poll: who do you love
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View poll results: who do you love
red
6 55%
blue
5 45%
Voters: 11.
#1

Brick

It seems she's
forgotten that
Chicago is a hazy city.
Subtle spine shivers
bring her back to
this reality.
Another back alley.
Another back alley.
Another breath I
stifle and bury.
Moments moving
with pace,
hearts beating
with haste
Our eyes shift
and shift and
shift...

I've been stumbled upon,

or perhaps this is
a rendezvous.
I offer my jacket,
she's quick to reject it,
so we both walk
with our chills and
matching goosebumps.

We arrive at her gate.
I hear the wind and
her whispering.
She says that
cancer is like sex
on a bed of pins
and needles.



this is desperation, you patronizing ass

Please,
take your hand out of mine,
they feel too much alike.
mine is smaller, but it has more to hide.
and when our fingers interweave
it's too easy to read all
the truth
carved deep into
my arms.


Please,
let me close my eyes,just for a little while.
they're too honest to be in
the face of a liar.
and if you get too close to me,
i swear you're going to see that
i've given you
nothing
but lies.


Please,
don't hold me so tight
while our limbs are entwined.
'cause i can't fight the urge
to reach deep inside
and rip out our veins,
tie us in our embrace, so
our blood
flows together
forever
when birds flap their wings do the make believe they're really arms?
#2
Ok peeps.

Ray, Steve...

There is one spot in the Grand Championship left, and only one of you two can take it. So the question is: would you like this 1v1 to decide who gets the spot, or would you like another 1v1 match specially for it - where you can use your "best" work?

This is how it ended:

The Hurt Within +25
Confusius +11
Phantom1 +11
we have sound + 10
Circular.Parade + 8
TrigFunction +7
Bassbeat77 +6
SilenceEvolves +6
Hopes_Downfall +6

SilenceEvolves won last season and so automatically gets a place. This leaves you two to fight for the 8th spot.

If you want to PM me a reply feel free.

peACE

High defs piece was a great opening, but I wasn't sure about the ending, Billy Bob's piece was good all the way through. So BB, just.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
Last edited by The Hurt Within at Feb 22, 2008,
#4
well steve, i'm pretty positive you'll win this guy (if you don't i'd actually be kinda pissed), so if you want it the spot is yours. plus, i'm not all that competetive. so i'm really indifferent about the whole thing.

its up to you.
when birds flap their wings do the make believe they're really arms?
#5
I like red. and this line:
I hear the wind and
her whispering.

was gorgeous.

But I love blue.
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#6
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well steve, i'm pretty positive you'll win this guy (if you don't i'd actually be kinda pissed), so if you want it the spot is yours. plus, i'm not all that competetive. so i'm really indifferent about the whole thing.

its up to you.


Well I definitely don't think I deserve it any more than you do, and I want you to at least have a shot at it. For the sake of time and keeping things simple we can just say the winner of this match gets it then.
#8
Didn't like either, but I picked blue.
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#12
congrats, steve the second.
when birds flap their wings do the make believe they're really arms?