#1
got another short one, was fooling around, and decided to redo one of my older songs in a different format, lemme know wat ya think!

its called frozen throne, cfc of course!

http://www.myspace.com/the2abraxis
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#2
Its cool. Its got a real nice classical flow to it, even though its on the electric. I can feel a kickass drum beat kicking in at sometime and playing it down an octave or something like that. I think that would sound awesome, but it's your song. I really like it though, no dead or bum notes that I can hear, and the song is pleasant.

9/10

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=793473
#3
Excellent playing, and very nice classical-esque composition throughout the most of it. The buildup section around 1:15 in is very nicely orchestrated. I love that lil Eric Johnsonish lick that you threw in towards the end, too. The tone might be a tiny bit abrasive/ the mic is overloading, but that's only a minor gripe. Good job on handling something that...dense.

If you've got a moment take a look at my lone little song, found here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=794054
#4
Surprisingly mellow, for someone with a Slayer logo. But really, I liked it, nice finger picking, it had a classical feel, and very emotional. I liked that string skip little fill towards the end, that was cool. There was obviously that little mess up at the end, but I'll forgive you, because I record for fun sometimes and don't get too nit picky. It doesn't take away from the song.

Speaking of, here's my crit topic with a link to my myspace! My newest is "For You", sort of an alt-acoustic piece. The one with Funk in the title is more funky...and Melancholy Little Kite is heavier. Pick one that sounds good, or all!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=793942
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#5
thanks for the comments, the recording is iffy cause i recorded through one of my pedals :-[ ill crit back in a few!
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#6
Good playing. I like the classical fingerpicking feel here. I can't really think anything to criticise except I think you should have used the clean channel to make the sustained notes sound better. Good job.