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Here's a song that I completed just a short while ago, my first one complete with drums and everything(drums were created with hammerhead since I don't have any real drums). The lyrics I wrote at least a year ago and just found them a week or two ago and added some music. Slowly but surely it built up into a song and I'm hoping to get some feedback on it. Also, I'm just curious to see if anybody can find out which book inspired me on this one, it's a well known book so it might not be too hard, but then again...

Anyways the song is in my profile, and as the title says its called Repent and Scream.

Thanks in advance for the crit and I'll crit your song as soon as possible.