#1
Me and 3 friends had a songwriting competition.

2 rounds.

1st round: Gay Cheezy love song.

2nd round: Angry, Protest song.


10 mins to finish each one.

I won 1st place for the 1st round.

And 2nd place for the second round.


Song 1:

Give Me Another Chance
Music and Lyrics written by: Scott Campbell

Whatever happened to, the times we spent together?
I open my arms for you
now
you pretend you don't remember.

(Chorus)
How did the time, change the way we feel?
What did you did between now and then that made me lose my appeal?
I can't imagine life without you.
So come on back now, please, you can't say no
With all this love in my heart, don't break the flow
Love me baby,
and
Give me another chance!!

When did we fall apart, baby?
We were so close, now it's just...
Time I spend alone!

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
When I see you with him, I just can't hold on
The feelings inside bring me down on my knees
and I crrryyyyyy!

(Kickass emotional Guitar solo)

(Chorus)

(Outro, much slower)

I can't live without you.


And song #2 (EXPLICIT!!) :

Damn it how he Nicks Him
Music and Lyrics written by: Scott Campbell.

All around me I see bodies
When does it stop?
We kill kill kill

kill kill kill
can't do nothin' to stop't

The ****in' man up above ain't doin nothin'
But sittin on his ass watchin' us kill ourselves

But that won't stop us from
ROCKIN'!
****IN'!
REPRODUCIN'!
ROCKIN'!

All around me I see bodies.
When does it stop?
We kill kill kill

kill kill k---**** the man who says peace'll last forever
He don't have no more eyes to see.
We've lived in this world in pain for centuries
and theres no end in sight.

But that won't stop us from
ROCKIN'!
****IN'!
REPRODUCIN'!
ROCKIN'!
MUTHA-****IN'!
SALUTIN'!
KILLIN'!
DESTROYIN'!

(Outro Nice, slow acoustic guitar noodling.)

It's tearin' us apart.


Woot.

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Gibson Zoot Suit in Rainbow
ESP LTD Deluxe EC-1000

Where are the ladies, man?
#2
uh, you're breaking a bunch of rules here, honey. read the rules at the top of the forum, and then repost.

*reported*
when birds flap their wings do the make believe they're really arms?
#3
ooooooo im gonna report you because you broke the rules! O MY GOD! ITS CAUSING SUCH A DISTURBANCE! I CARE THAT THE RULES ARE BROKEN SO MUCH! HARASS ME!

haha no but for real i like the second one. its ragetastic
#4
Srry brah.

I shoulda read the rules first, my bad.
Gibson Zoot Suit in Rainbow
ESP LTD Deluxe EC-1000

Where are the ladies, man?
#5
haha i was joking man. seriously its fun to break the stupid forum rules then watch peoples angry reactions
#7
oh god.
once again...
neither piece seemed to have an maturity to it... but keep writing youll get there.