#1
Like spring rain
Tears stain my face
By passion, I've been betrayed
Time eats away at love
Im an example, here I lie
A broken winged dove
A midsummers romance
Cut short, by fates plan
An intertwined destiny, unwoven
Why was I chosen?
Am I an example, manipulated by fate
Pushed so far all I experience is hate
I see my beauty queen
In the arms of another man
I know it's not right
But I want his blood on my hands
A foundation of love built so high
Only to be destroyed, in the blink of an eye
Rubble is all that remains
Internally I witness, the decomposition of my brain
Nervous system, has been driving insane
overwhelmed by an abundant sense of pain
But this can be the end, with time
All hearts mend
Scars heal, yet the wound is still there
And I'll steal hear your voice
Linger in the air
Though, all is not lost
I'm sure I'm not at the end, it's still a ringtoss
Time will tell, what'll come to be
Until then, it's this suffering
..and me.
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION
#2
...wow i usually find crap lyrix on here that dont even attempt to rhyme but this was ****in great! n i like the fact that u use ibanezes lol keep up the good work
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#3
...I half expected an insult considering its the typical boo hoo miss my girlfriend ****, but thanks man !

Yeah lately these days, I haven't been playing much. All I do is write, gettin' a bit rusty
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION
#4
all I can say is this was a roller coaster.... great lines... bad lines... decent lines...


Am I an example, manipulated by fate

I see my beauty queen
In the arms of another man
I know it's not right
But I want his blood on my hands

strong lines...

Rubble is all that remains
Internally I witness, the decomposition of my brain
Nervous system, has been driving insane

bad lines...

everything else is at least decent or better though. I liked it overall
#5
yeah, the nervous system line was supposed to read

Nervous system, has been driven insane. I'll try and work on those lines, however. Thanks for the feedback
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION