#1
Hey all. Its been many months but i'm back. Guess it's cause i've been happy 99% for a long time! Then a drunken fight caused a set of lyrics to flow. Please critique, will return it.

Club Noise

We raise our voices to shout above the noises
And battle on with slurred words
We pull away and end the game
With tears that clean the dance floor

Her volatile character compares to Dracula
Contrast when the day turns night
Demons walk with me, side by side
What gets inside?

We dry off and sober up
We talk in the dark and make up

Anger ignites and I feel alive
Burning inside I stay calm
Sombre actions of apathy
Until I run

We dry off and sober up
We talk in the dark and make up

Memories escape the mind
Safe in those arms – it’s alright
Live and let die
#2
I like the comparison to Dracula. Sounds like a crazy night, huh? I really like this piece. It's hard to describe, but the lyrics are strong. Not too much I can think of that's wrong, or if there is anything wrong to begin with. Great job.
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