#1
[Verse]
Politics!
No one cares.
We will be free!
Just not in here.

[Chorus]
In the land of the free,
And the propaganda slaves.
Redneck '08
So much "brotherly" hate,
Brothers in arms,
Ask for civil war.

[Verse]
Presidents,
Don't even care,
About poor, starving and homeless.

[Chrous]

[Bridge]
Anarchy in the Nation
Mindless presentation.
We are the people,
They can't hide it forever
9/11 stupidity
Down with U.S. minority.
I plege allegiance to the flag
of our majority!

[Chorus]

[Chorus]
Quote by SeveralSpecies
How the f*ck are you gonna get a cat to bark?


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Matt Freeman>You
#3
Sounds like you're right.
Quote by SeveralSpecies
How the f*ck are you gonna get a cat to bark?


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Matt Freeman>You
#4
This isn't good.

You have statements in this song that make absolutely no sense.


Politics!
No one cares.


Seriously. Do you live in the USA? You might want to get hold of a newspaper and read. It's full of politics nowadays. What makes you think you can state that 'no one cares'? No offense but it sounds like you're one of these teens that want to be all 'anarchist' and stuff.

In the land of the free,
And the propaganda slaves.
Redneck '08
So much "brotherly" hate,
Brothers in arms,
Ask for civil war.


This didn't make a lot of sense to me either. The first two lines seems contradictory to me. The last line was just lame. You want freedom. War, and more specifically civil war isn't exactly what I imagine when I think of freedom.

Presidents,
Don't even care,
About poor, starving and homeless.


This is one of those statements that make me dislike political songs. If you're going to write a political song, get your facts right and don't generalise. Do you really think every single president in the whole wide world doesn't care about 'poor, starving and homeless'?


Anarchy in the Nation
Mindless presentation.
We are the people,
They can't hide it forever
9/11 stupidity
Down with U.S. minority.
I plege allegiance to the flag
of our majority!


No offense, but this was a load of crap. The last three lines made absolutely no sense and I also think a lot of people won't like your line about 9/11.


The only advice that I can give you is that you should either give up writing political songs or either get your facts right and write songs that a) don't generalise b) make sense c) aren't full of teenage angsty anarchistic statements.


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Last edited by phantom1 at Feb 23, 2008,