#1
i wish i was a menace to society
thats why i walk around the streets at night
with my gat beside me
travis bickle? you aint seen nothing yet
im packing more heat
than a ****in hiroshima A-bomb
and i swear to god
im about to let loose
so please excuse my behaviour in the next few minutes
because im about to visit heights
you aint never seen before.
#3
Who's travis bickle? Am I supposed to know? I'm confused. This sounds like someone who's desperately trying to sound badass, and it comes off a little disturbing and kind of funny. But not really raw, or edgy or anything like that.
#5
Only one thread per day, two per week, Sir.

Reporting so the mods can sloe.

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