i wish i was a menace to society
thats why i walk around the streets at night
with my gat beside me
travis bickle? you aint seen nothing yet
im packing more heat
than a ****in hiroshima A-bomb
and i swear to god
im about to let loose
so please excuse my behaviour in the next few minutes
because im about to visit heights
you aint never seen before.
Who's travis bickle? Am I supposed to know? I'm confused. This sounds like someone who's desperately trying to sound badass, and it comes off a little disturbing and kind of funny. But not really raw, or edgy or anything like that.
Only one thread per day, two per week, Sir.

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