#1
Hey guys

The stereotype's reading circle

It's amazing how deep the sky can be
and how perfect the night is
the day you decided to stay home.

God, I wish I hadn't drink so much coffee.
I even regret buying those stupid flowers

Well, I think that the snow,
falling on top of my head,
would be the perfect simile
for the cold side of your bed.
I think that circuses
were made to trigger happiness
on people like me.
People who have the time to talk,
but no one to talk to.

Well, I hope the show will be good tonight.
I hope I get the chance to join
the club of stereotypes.

"Damas y caballeros, esta noche, desde la península de Yucatán,
denle la bienvenida al inigualable hombre león!"
#2
Quote by cubs
Hey guys

The stereotype's reading circle

It's amazing how deep the sky can be
and how perfect the night is
the day you decided to stay home.

loved the first line
it was great. the rest wasnt too far behind
this was a great intro.. made me want to read on.

God, I wish I hadn't drink so much coffee.
I even regret buying those stupid flowers

not bad.. kinda sets up the rest of the song.

Well, I think that the snow,
falling on top of my head,
would be the perfect simile
for the cold side of your bed.
I think that circuses
were made to trigger happiness
on people like me.
People who have the time to talk,
but no one to talk to.

the first four lines were good.
i really liked them for some reason.
the last two lines were my favorite though..
this stanza is great.. helps me feel what you are talking about here.
good.

Well, I hope the show will be good tonight.
I hope I get the chance to join
the club of stereotypes.

good ending. perfect way to sum this up. theres not much to say about it

"Damas y caballeros, esta noche, desde la península de Yucatán,
denle la bienvenida al inigualable hombre león!"

errr? i cant read that crap, so i wont be much help here.


all in all, i really liked this.
8/10.
good job.
i had no real beef with this, so im not going to be much help.
i really liked it thoug

check out 'into the sunshine'?