#2
was this recorded with just a webcam mic or something? and are you just playing to a backing track? if so then i wont say anything about mixing really since you cant do much with that, i think the guitar sounds a bit tinny even for a webcam recording so maybe try diff amp settings? not a bad solo, you can definately play but it got a bit samey to me, especially from 3 mins until 3:15 where it stuck around the same place. after that at around 3:20 where the drums sped up it sounded like you went out of time. keep at it though
Guitars-
krozka-sharpe raider session 'revo'
ibanez s520ex with SD TB-10 full shred bridge
ibanez sz520qm
epiphone les paul custom
epiphone EJ200

Amp-
Orange tiny terror with PPC112 cab
#3
Ill agree with notonlybutalso. But I will add that the build up you have is nice to see and some of the patterns you played worked well together besides in the areas in went kinda stale.

Really good stuff man, just shorten it up a little.
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