This is just something i wrote, it doesn't have a namem im workin on that.

I spend my last supper
Behind iron bars
Cut off from the fresh air
And luminous stars
A man looks at me
And says its time to go
I wish I had told you
I wish you did know

And when I ccome back to meet you
You won't remember me at all
And when I come back to see you
You won't remember me at all

We used to be good friends
Until you went away
Now we have hardly
Anything to say
I thought you were special
Special to me
I wish I had told you
I wish you could see


and i can't decide to write another verse or just repeat the first one.
any comments or pointers would be much appreciated
Last edited by bushman777 at Feb 24, 2008,
I'm really digging this one. Some help though and I think I know the answer to this you're not actually on death row cuz then you can't come back to meet anyone. I liked this one alot it reminds me of being trapped inside yourself. I would right another verse or bridge or you could fill in the spot with a guitar solo or something and then just repeat the chorus. Overall a really nice job.

Please crit mine "I won't be there tomorrow" and "President of War"