#1
This is a death metal song I wrote. I think It's good. The places where there are large gaps between stanzas are where the guitar solos would go.


Tear the cold white flesh
Rape the bloodied wretch
Eyeless sockets filled with cum
I've been raping my dead mum

Eyes gouged from my father's head
Knife peirces heart , now he is dead
Putrid phallus of the murderous and mad
I've been raping my dead dad

Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
Now you'll meet your fate

Sawing off the rotting limbs
Preparing him for horrid sins
****ing him like I ****ed my mother
I've been raping my dead brother

Feasting on their flesh and skin
The worst of it will soon begin
Cut her throat as I anally fist her
I've been raping my dead sister

Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
Now you'll meet your fate

Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
Now you'll meet your fate


Anally rape the bloodied corpse
Ride it's ass like a ****ing horse
Come and come it never ends
I've been raping my dead friend.

Rip the tail and gouge the eyes
Rotting carcass surrounded by flies
Tear out it's fur and pound it's ass
I've been raping my dead cat

Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
Now you'll meet your fate

Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
Now you'll meet your fate


Necropheliac rape!
Noone can escape
Necropheliac rape!
two and a half men.
#3
i dunno. i like death metal with a message. not to put down your lyricism, but gore is just plain meaningless.
#4
your one cool guy.
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#5
I kinda chose to stop reading once i figured your writing a song about cumming in your mom's eye...

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#11
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Did you show it to your family?

Do as he says.

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#18
i loved it. reminds me of cannible corpse and waking the cadaver a little too much, but oh well. nice. i really really hope this has a meaning.
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#19
listen, I know you want to be heard.
love dead like a crushed fly

for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in
#21
Isn't necropheliac rape a redundant term? The person isn't alive, so clearly there is no way they can agree to the sex. You should take that into consideration, maybe expand on the idea a bit.
#22
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA WOW that was scary
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#24
The impression I get is this: you're trying way, way too hard to write something you think will be shocking or horrifying. It's pretty annoying, honestly, because not many people are going to want to hear about you systematically violating your dead family members.

Try writing something straight from the heart instead of overthinking it. And if that was from the heart, seek some professional help. Immediately.
#25
This is clearly about the death of some one "raping" the memory of their loved. It's all a metaphor for the visage of death and how hard it is to loose someone.

Good job man, I'm glad to see someone so invested in their metaphors.
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#27
The title caught my attention, now I am disappointed.
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#28
Heres some funny but nasty lyrics:

Pussyjuice Chup a Chup

Pu-ssy-juuuuice !!!!!!

I'm in a candystore, what do I seeeeee?

Flavours...like strawberry,
& melon, banana-taste,
they have cherry, oh what a waste!
Cuz what I really wanna choose
A Chup-a-chup that taste like pussyjuice!!!

'Can I help you sir?' and I look up at her
She's gorgeous in that skirt
Oh yeah you can my love,
take your panties off
Please bend over it doesn't hurt!
Do me a favour, a certain flavour
Is what I want suckin' Chup-a-chup
Yeah I'm a dude, that dislikes fruit
Only taste-of-****-is-good!
She pulls up her skirt,
this bendin' over bird
My favourite kinda meat,
it smells so sweet
Vibrating eggs disappear between her legs
She-is-my-recipe!
Vibrating eggs snore,
sound of buzzing fills the store
She dripps from her lips,
between her horny hips
Ofcourse I also wanna **** it,
but first this fluid in a bucket
After that I put it in the freezer,
Next to my pussyjuice Bacardi Breezer!
Do you wanna be my favourite recipe?!!

Pussyjuice, the taste for me !!!!
Lick it & suck it !!!! [8x]
Pu-ssy-juice, chup-a-chup-a-chup! [2x]


Yes this is an actual song by Romprepop.
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