#1
The first emotional song iv written. i call it a chest grabber. Cuz it just kinda makes your heart ache to sing. kind of a poppy yet downbeat acoustic song. tell me what you think.

Verse 1:
Im waiting in the last scene
Of this pathetic tragedy
And fallen on my knees
I pray its just a dream
But when my eyes are opened
I realized i was blind
Beneath your smile is hatred
Beneath your words are lies

Verse 2:
So i write myself a letter
Filled with anger and denial
And when i read it later
Ill be torn apart inside
At everything i said
About you and i
Between hate and happy endings
Tears well up in our eyes

Chorus:
Who are you to make me promise
That its okay and it is right to follow what we feel
Don't hate me for being honest
But im so sick of waiting for what we both know that time cant heal

Verse 3:
Lay crying in your sleep
As i lay down beside you
Forever you're deceived
Cuz i still hold this against you
Pathetically i wait
and Passively Ignore
I wish that i could hate
but cant help but adore

Chorus:
Who are you to make me promise
That its okay and it is right to follow what we feel
Don't hate me for being honest
But im so sick of waiting for what we both know that time cant heal
#2
Wow. I really liked this song. You rhyme very, very well, and keep a very good rhythm throughout. Definitely one of my favorite pieces I've read on this site.
TheInfringement
#3
Quote by TheInfringement
Wow. I really liked this song. You rhyme very, very well, and keep a very good rhythm throughout. Definitely one of my favorite pieces I've read on this site.

thanks homeslice. haha... this is just what happes when i get bored and start to dwell on girls.