#1
this is an instrumental song that me and my friend plan on recording
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btw: this isnt the actual name of the song

thanks
Attachments:
song.zip
#2
I liked it, I think that the the song could use a bass. Or have the piano and guitar play together. Sounded to me like something Rush would write.
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#3
That was thoroughly badass. Only one point I feel the need to comment on.

Although the actual piano section was brilliant I didn't like the transition into it. The first 35 bars built a great energy and is fantastically catchy, but all of a sudden it stops with the E5 and goes into the piano part. Though it technically works I didn't get the appreciation for the piano section as well as I should have, because of the abrupt introduction to it. Perhaps having the piano join the guitar in some way, then easing things up before going into the calmer piano section?

Other than that I loved it. Even it only being one guitar and drums didn't take away from it. Excellent piece.

Heres a link to mine. Also an instrumental. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=796236
#4
wow. this was really good. Liked the energy of it. I agree with the piano-part already stated. The piano and the bassdrum is off beat.