Its the first real song I've written
I only have two verses so far
I'll crit4crit if you want
Here it is, its about heroin addiction:

"One more day, let me shed my dead wood
Just a minute, I misunderstood
Buried my soul behind the bleachers
In a cold dark world of ivory preachers

Fifteen miles beneath the sunrise
River runs up towards the sky
Clipped my side to the pink eye flight
Won't come down for the rest of the night"