#1
It's a song that I wrote, but I need an original poem for english class for thursday, so if it's good I'll just speak it in rhythm. Hopefully you'll enjoy it.

I opened my eyes for the first time today.
New experience, that was for sure.
I’ll need to find a new way;
A new cure.

What did you do with that loaded gun?
Tell me, was it fun?
For me, that would’ve weighed a ton.
This Hell’s only just begun.

Twenty-two kids died today.
Casualties of war, they say.
Don’t get involved in this fray.
Turn around and walk away.

Sunday mornings I wonder,
What this world’s come to.
I make a blunder,
Hope I can make it through.

I hear a scream,
Whatever, it’s all a dream.
From what I can gleam,
Chaos reigns supreme.

Do you enjoy this?
Something’s amiss.
I’ll reminisce,
Over my ignorant, childhood bliss.

Sunday mornings I wonder,
What this world’s come to.
I make a blunder,
Hope I can make it through.
#3
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Partscaster/Tele into a bunch of pedals, a Maz 18 head, and a Z Best cab.