#1
this is called rip from my band solvent state

My regret to you my dear
You shed not a tear
So why should i give a damn if you fell down
Well just pick yourself back up
Don't even pull that one on me
Unless you're pulling your trigger
That don't work with me anymore

So go on and pull me around again
So go on anf push me around again

My pity out to you
Time wasted at its best
Bet you wish that you could go back now
Well you don't gotta go home
But you gotta get the **** outta here
You can't come crawling back no more

So go on and pull me around again
So go on and push me around again

Now god bless you indeed
Never in your eternal soul
Have you been the victim
But always the creator of our pain
That you keep pushing off on me
That you keep pulling over me
It's a wonder I can still breath
Sight dissapating, mentally breaking

Never meant to do this to you
Must have been from all the times that you had let me down
Now i can torture you, strip you, extort you
Take away all the things you used to hold me down

So go on and push me around again
So go on and pull me around again

I'll rip it all away
To live alone we must be a beast or a god, says Aristotle, leaving out the third case: One must be both, a philosopher.
-Freidrich Nietzsche

-The Candle Burns At Both EndsX=X
#2
Thats a great song, I really enjoyed it. Do you have music for it yet? The opening stanza was the best part. This bit was particularily (cant spell that) good -

Don't even pull that one on me
Unless you're pulling your trigger
That don't work with me anymore

So overall its a great piece of song writing. Care to crit mine? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=796719
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#3
i liked the song but it was kinda boring, to stright forward. you dodnt leave much room to think you just through it out there. the great thing about songs is when your done listening it leaves you in a state that allows you to figure out what the lyrics mean.

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