#1
I recently made this riff and was wondering if I could get any help from anyone making it a little better. Maybe adding stuff to it?

Thanks
-Matt

e-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D-|-0---3-0-5-0-6-5-0-3-5-8-----------7-----------10-----------5-------------|
A-|-0-0-3-0-5-0-6-5-0-3-5-8-----------7-----------10-----------5-------------|
D-|-0-0-3-0-5-0-6-5-0-3-5-8(strum 8x)-7(strum 8x)-10(strum-8x)-5(strum 8x)---|

e-|---------------------0-----|
B-|---------------------0-----|
G-|---------------------0-----|
D-|---------------------0-----|
A-|--0--00-0-00-0-------------|
D-|--0--00-0-00-0-------------|
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Also, I mixed that riff and the strumming parts out of this:

e-|-----------------------------------------------------|
B-|-----------------------------------------------------|
G-|-----------------------------------------------------|
D-|-5-----------7-----------8-----------10--------------|
A-|-5-----------7-----------8-----------10--------------|
D-|-5(strum 8x)-7(strum 8x)-8(strum 8x)-10(strum 8x)----|
Last edited by MatrixBaller04 at Feb 26, 2008,
#4
Hi

This is how I'd play your first main riff. Nothing original or fancy, brings me back to old days of Down and Stoner Rock.

Didn't incorporate the 888 stuff or the breakdown because I didn't feel that metalcore stuff fit the bluesy/rocking mood.

If you indeed wanted to take this in a metalcore direction, disregard my input

cheers
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