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I've been writing this song tonight, It's the first one where I've actually tried to write lyrics seriously, please let me know what you think. If there are any cliches, too much repitition, or anything.

Reflection(tentative)

verse:
The truth,
the lies.
The truth, is hard to see.
The truth, is all I(we) want

Looking within,
I can’t seem to find,
a sense of direction,
amidst all these lies.

Can’t you see me through the doorway,
Crumpled up against the wall?
To free my spirit,
to free my soul,
the only way I know how.


Chorus:
The mirror,
is a reflection of my mind.
I see my face,
my staring eyes.

I watch in despair,
I have no control.
The lines keep growing til
my life is sold.
Last edited by 13579ed at Feb 25, 2008,