I've got two new songs in my profile. You crit mine I'll crit yours. The one entitled "New Song 2-25-08" I know gets way sloppy a little more than half way in but that's all I've got time for now. Anyways, tell me what you think and I'll do the same for you! Thanks!
My Gear
Fender Player's Stratocaster
MXR 10-Band EQ
Blackstar HT-Dual
Moog MF-103 12-Stage Phaser
Boss ME-50
MXR Carbon Copy
Peavey Valveking 112
New song 2-25-08:

I thought it sounded really cool. I loved the main riff. My only suggestion is mabye to turn the lead guitar up a little bit, it is sometimes drowned out.

The part at around 1:50 sounded really cool also, lots of cool sounding riffs going on in this song.

The song actually held my interest all the way through, which is pretty good considering there are no lyrics. I think the song sounded awesome overall, mabye think about adding some drums in to finish it up.

Ibanez RG3EX1
Squier Strat
Ibanez RG4EX1
Vox 30ADVT
Fender DG series acoustic
Dunlop Crybaby
Fender Frontman 15G
Nice work! I would like to hear it also with some vocs and drums. Interesting without being annoying....pretty captivating.

Ill have another listen.............
If you check my profile song please leave a comment on any part.....THANKS!!!