#1
I posted a song a while ago but i have two different versions involving two different riffs, the different riffs come in at abou 30 seconds on each of the mp3s which are in my profile. Let me know what one you like better and or why, or if you dont like any of it thats fine as well, I know its kind of generic/metalcorish and the quality isn't the best (and i think i missed quite a few notes on riff 1) but hopefully i can get some feedback. Thanks.

They are also clearly labled as Riff 1 and Riff 2
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ESP Ltd EC 1000
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#4
alright thanks for the input
Current Gear

ESP Ltd EC 1000
Schecter C1 FR

Jackson Dinky
Crap Acoustic
Crate Excalibur GX2200H
4x12cab