#1
I have a chorus written but this is it and i would like some help on verses and possibly a bridge. This is my first song by the way. If you could just help me get some rythmes in there and a verse that would be great.

I need you like a flower needs sun
I can't go on without you anymore
Your the cure to my disease
It's your love that keeps me alive
#2
Hey, why don't you just edit your previous post? Just fit this in there and mention any updates.

I was looking for some old rough lyrics I had, but I can't seem to find them. If I do, I can show you something that may help you.