#1
So yeah. First time through writing these lyrics and just looking for opinions and critcism if you'd like. Thanks.


at one point I was waiting for you
and someone came by and just had to ruin it
and the other one had always wished for me to let you go
and finally i have, although i still care
but now you've come back after a long period of inexistance
and i've got a gut feeling you've changed for the worse
and it's eating me alive

what have they told you
did they make me sound like a wh0re
if only you had waited and let me tell you the truth
here it is if you let me announce
that it had never even been close to my fault

sometimes people get in the way
and break you to pieces
or in this case
just push you the wrong way
now locked up in a cage
for his crime to my name
what a shame but it's true
and I had never done a thing to deserve it

the way you stared into my eyes
has changed from locked and gentle to fierce and diverted
and it's killing me
i feel like everyone's against me
congrats you fiend for committing a crime
that was far from committed
and they all stop and glare at this fool
who's kind gestures were taken too far to be mentioned
without having you take a knife to my throat

what have they told you
did they make me sound like a wh0re
if only you had waited and let me tell you the truth
here it is if you let me announce
that it had never even been close to my fault

people got in my way
they all tore me apart
stained the body but tore up the heart
and now one's shut out with the dark
suffocated with the hands that came too close
and the other has simply drifted apart
and I had never done a thing to deserve it

and now you're here and you can't keep contact
you just feel the need to push me away
it had always felt so special
and I would constantly wait for this day
but now that it has come i really hope that it'll fade away

and people got in my way...
i've been permantly scarred
Last edited by x[C]hristianex at Feb 27, 2008,
#3
Hah Waait I Dunno It Might Be Good If I Heard Some Sort Of Tune With It<3
#4
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Hah Waait I Dunno It Might Be Good If I Heard Some Sort Of Tune With It<3



I'm working on that next.
I'll be sure to put it up when i get it. =)
#5
im sorry. it may sound better with music but the lyrics are IMO crap utterly horrible. i relize what your trying to put across, but because of the lyrics; this is going to be one fo those songs you listen to while looking for something better to listen to.