I had one section repeat for duration's sake, so if it sounds repetitive, remember how much drums and vocals can fix.

Anywaysss, I don't have much to say about this one.
folkish blues.zip
Beware lest you lose the substance by grasping at the shadow
The whole song has a great vibe, the main riff is awesome, the bass is nice too, I didn't liked some transitions but as you said vocals and drums make the difference. Great catchy song!