#1
Ok buddies, this is a song i composed today, i know, there's still work to do, but would you mind telling me what you think about it?

EDIT: song finished, it only lacks lyrics.
Attachments:
Empty Shell.zip
Last edited by Adhrast at Feb 28, 2008,
#2
I wish the drums were finished! You're on to something there, I'm surprised how well it sounded for just a guitar and drums.

The intro and chorus chords had a nice drone effect, I like the way you changed the key at the end too.
#3
Quote by ctb
I wish the drums were finished! You're on to something there, I'm surprised how well it sounded for just a guitar and drums.

The intro and chorus chords had a nice drone effect, I like the way you changed the key at the end too.


thanks mate
my buddy and i have finished it, now the only thing that we need to complete are the lyrics.
listen to it and crit again, if you wish