#1
I play in a progressive metalcore band. We just recorded a new song. Tell me what you think, and all feedback and suggestions are appreciated. I'll give c4c. Thanks!

Edit - Well the link didnt show up before so here it is:

What's Left of Her
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#4
Yeah. Our vocalist is a pretty small dude so hes working on it. We get great feedback at shows but everyone says he cant scream at all when we record. Haha.
#5
Some of the keyboard stuff seemed out of context, but overall I think it was really good. (and unlike mc910, I did like the vocals)

Oh, and the logo/banner deign is top notch.
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#6
I thought you guys sounded pretty good. Added as well
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#7
Thanks for the kind words guys. We really appreciate it. Also OThugSd, I'll tell my friend (who designed all the artwork) that you liked his work!

Thanks everyone and remember, if youd like me to critique anything or just check it out, link me!
#8
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Thanks for the kind words guys. We really appreciate it. Also OThugSd, I'll tell my friend (who designed all the artwork) that you liked his work!

Thanks everyone and remember, if youd like me to critique anything or just check it out, link me!


Let me know what you think about this, if you would.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=798133
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#9
Sounds ace man. Added as friend. Kind of surprising you guys aren't signed to an indie label, your definietly good enough.
#12
How many places you send things to? Tried Prosthetic Records? Good luck to you guys.
#13
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I liked it, except for the vocals.

EDIT - I added my band to your friend's. If you guys ever decide to do a show in Tampa, FL hit us up!


Thanks dude. The vocals are really rough haha. If we're ever down there we'll be sure to set something up.

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How many places you send things to? Tried Prosthetic Records? Good luck to you guys.


Thanks man! We actually hadn't even considered them. The thing is, we havent finished our demo CD yet (we havent even started our first official EP, but we will be soon...basically rerecordings of the demos that we use now just so people can hear us). Once we finish our recordings, I'll be sending in. As of right now, we've tried with labels that accept links to our myspace or have a large internet database.
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#14
hell yeah guys that was awesume
i dont know what that guy was talking about vocals are sick
why arnt youse signed youse are good
#15
hell yeah guys that was awesume
i dont know what that guy was talking about vocals are sick
why arnt youse signed youse are good

Thanks dude. We're trying haha.

But to everyone who didn't like the vocal, was it because you don't like screaming or that style, or was it our vocals specifically?
#17
Thanks for the reply man. I don't really know what to make of an"I can't put my finger exactly on it." response but thanks anyway hahah.
#18
I wish you guys all the luck. If you released a CD, I would buy it. If you ever tour the UK, and my bands got itself sorted, we'd happily support!
#20
Sounded pretty good. Vocals ain't too hot though, too small for screams. Just sound scratchy.
#23
i like the music, Vocals arent really the type i like though. Still really good though you guys should get signed to an indie label once you start trying. keep it up
#24
Thanks, were actually looking into getting signed. Whenever we finish the EP we'll work on that. We have trustkill looking at us apparently this weekend, so we'll see how that goes.

But thanks for the kind words.
#25
Holy ****! I have always loved your tabs, and Im love your band now, but Pittsburgh! My home town!!! You guys rock!
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#27
Ahh. Champayne, that's sick! Not many great bands in the 'scene' here, but we try our best to make some decent music.

You should look into our show monday if you're local here then. It's out in Charleroi (Club Octane), but its with some sick bands. Dead to Fall broke up, but Sea of Treachery, Impending Doom, and Arsonists Get All the Girls are still gonna be there.