#1
Happiness can drive you to let yourself feel free
sadness can deprive you and leave only misery
contentment can make you feel things you never held
but its the life you live and the people you love
which get you through this world

to think your life is simple
will truly make you blind
to fight and hope is what is takes
creating a peaceful mind
but taking all you have
and pocket full of what you believe
but How can they claim you ever died
when you never truly lived

wanting to come home but to an empty shell
knowing but never stopping yourself from creating
you own personal piece of hell
to give up all you’ve earned
for all you’ve ever dreamed
thinking that is the way to get out
is truly the forgotten lives creed

to think your life is simple
will truly make you blind
to fight and hope is what is takes
creating a peaceful mind
but taking all you have
and pocket full of what you believe
but How can they claim you ever died
when you never truly lived
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.
Last edited by Gizmo69 at Feb 28, 2008,
#2
this is good though you should go back and read through it carfully for mistakes. i saw some spelling like truley=truly and some others. also some places were words can be added and some removed.


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#3
^^^ that is noted.. thank you.. :-)

ive corrected some of the spelling too... :-)
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.
Last edited by Gizmo69 at Feb 28, 2008,
#4
an advice poem...
Nice...
without being cynical...how old are you :P
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THE WISDOM OF YOUTH

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It sounds so familiar...which I guess is the point..
oh well, cool man.
I do not really have much to say or intereperet as
(not negatively) it's pretty straight forward
And structurally tight
so once again well done
enjoyed it
#5
Im 18... :-)
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.
#6
This is pretty cool. I love lyrics. My whole reason for doing music is because I have alot to say. Keep writing!
#7
thank you
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.