#1
if you can't guess by this song, I really want to be able to play metal. And yes, this song is put to metal guitar

Have you ever heard the metal?
I listen to the metal
I listen to the metal
And I want to play like them

I want to be the master of my instrument
It shouldn’t be the other way around
The fluid notes should come right out but then again
I don’t play the metal. I can’t but I’ve tried

I sit with headphones on
And listen to the metal
Play along in the air
Pretend without a care
I want to be able
To make people shiver
By mastering my instrument
So completely

Jealousy
The metal it draws me in
It sends shivers down my spine
When I hear the harmonization
I want to play the metal
But I don’t know how
I guess I wasn’t meant to play it after all

I sit with headphones on
And listen to the metal
Play along in the air
Pretend without a care
I want to be able
To make myself shiver
By mastering my instrument
So completely

So completely
Do you wander
What If I could
Take you to the stars
Just by playing a series of notes
Could I ever
Could I ever
Succeed in doing that
I don’t know
I don’t know
#2
Thats pretty cool. Gave a good little laugh.
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#3
O.K.... WTF

What do you want us to say, do want us to critique it?

If so, I guess the concept is cool, because it is METAL.
Last edited by atlasguitar at Feb 27, 2008,
#4
I like what your getting at but you over used the phrase the metal. honestly complete and utter over repition. besides that i like

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