#1
I began writing words in my math class today, they manifested themselves into this:

Battle Within

Life like a river flows away
As we drift through the fray
Try our luck and take our chance
Survivor wields broken branch

Wind is howling grit and sand
As we conquer promised land
Weary foot and burning skin
Warrior fights from within

Swarming hive and endless plain
Battle constantly is raged
Warrior fights while worker toils
Forgotten dreams in broken homes

Warrior wielding broken branch
Conquers the promised land
Worker toils through the night
Lost in the river flowing life
Try our luck and take our chance
As we sink into the sand
Foul forgotten dream has gone
Nothing left to right the wrong

Battle over, nobody wins
Warrior fights from within


The title is tentative at the moment. I think it would make a good piece for a fast, Mastodon-esque song, with lots of fancy melodic riffing. Opinions?
#4
When I read your title I was like "wow this is just going to be some ****ty generic rock song." But I was pleasantly surprised. I would definitely think of another title, however.
#5
Quote by killsPEACHES
When I read your title I was like "wow this is just going to be some ****ty generic rock song." But I was pleasantly surprised. I would definitely think of another title, however.


Haha, yes, I must agree. The title is utterly terrible. Thus, suggestions?