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Hey let me know what you guys think of this song i wrote il crit4 crit whoever does mine

thanks!


planted a garden inside my mind
in hopes of inner peace to find
i told you once
you told me twice
i thought good luck was always thrice
now were sober
and its over
i should have kept that four leaf clover

gods above and hells below
but what will make my garden grow

christmas trees out on the lawn
ive been sleeping with the lights on
suburbs smother everything
even my attempts to sing
guess im going nowhere fast
got a head stuck in hte past

gods above and hells below
but what will make my garden grow

thought i saw god but got blinded by science
didnt think it would ever find us
i hid it away deep in my spine
i should have used a less cliche line