#1
Hey guys!

After some mellower songs, I decided to record an heavy song again =].
The result is some kind of proggy/metally + my own style song.
(Pretty technical guitar, melodic stuff, fast solo, etc.etc.).
I've just started singing, so don't go all that hard on that ;x.
Also, I have been ill today, but I really wanted to finish this song, so yeah It's not all that great. (I'll may record them again, soon).
I'd really love some feedback/comments on this song .

Linky: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Pr0teZT/ (there: Living in a lie).

Thanks in advance guys !
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars
#3
ill write as i listen to it.

the intro is brilliant man, very dream theater/LTE vibe. incredible guitar work. as with the guy above me, i dont much like the vocals at all. sorry dude, its passable but the tone isnt very good and some of the notes are a bit off. maybe its because your sick, but the vocals are definitley the weak link of the song.
good rhythm guitar so far. i like the solo, lots of cool stuff in there, some of the faster sections are not as smooth as they should be.
overall, good backing drums, amazing guitar work, leads and rhythm, sub par singing.
not everyone gets to be a lead singer, id stick to the guitar, youve got skill there.

listen to my new acoustic song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=799176
#4
i think your snare drum should be more prominant. guitar work was good as usual. vocals are improving. i actually really enjoyed the verses this time. the chorus was not so enjoyable. alot of the stuff was a bit out of your range. the guitar work was fabulous. also, try using fewer effects on the vocal.

to sum up: work on the chorus melody, guitar work was great, and good writing!

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=798906
Too cool for a signature.
#6
Thank ya'll so much for the feedback guys !
I'll check out your songs when I'm back from school .
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars
#8
Quote by AA00P
Dunno about the vocals. : /
But the guitar's simply great.


Forgot about this one, thanks mate =].
Guitarist for: Delain, Arrow Haze, Vengeance, Tri-Head and others.

Official Endorser/Clinicer of:

Aristides Guitars