#1
alright this is a new short video i made. i called it Get Bent, just cause there is a nice bend in the main riff. anyways, i came up with it a while ago, but when i recently threw pinch harmonics and some legato runs into the mix, it started to feel much more like a possible song.
Get Bent!
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#2
fair play man, that rocked,
I loved the PHs, you play them
really well, and they come out
nice and clearly, very nice sound
on your guitar too,
pretty much the only thing
I can think of to improve it
is to have a change of pace at some
point (Y) Other than that,
very very good
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#3
pretty cool man
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#4
thanks for the crit. nice playing. good pinch harmonics, and the legato was very well done. id like to hear this into a full song, maybe with a cool meldoy or possibly vocals as well
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#6
good pinch harmonics man...good idea needs work, and for coming through a mono video on youtube I really liked your tone.

btw thanks for the crit on my songs
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#7
that was rad man
nice harmonics though maybe a wee bit over done
excellent though, don't get me wrong
#8
Thanks for the crit!

Pretty sweet, very nice pinch harmonics. But as rebelmidget said, may have been a little overdone.
Nice rhythm with a nice solid tone.
There was a tad bit of repetitiveness, but since it's a song in the works...it doesn't account for much.

Good job, this'll probably sound pretty sweet when you lay some vox, bass, and drum with it.
#9
As always man good stuff. Has the making for a pretty good song imo.
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#10
Nice metal tone. Very good PH's. Good to see people who can do them consistently - it's not all that easy.

Good playing too - It wasn't sloppy at all.

The riff was pretty cool. Reminded me of more hard rock than metal as it has a bit of a bluesy (don't know if that's the right word) feel to it.

It'd be great to hear this is a proper song.

Good stuff.
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#11
I think that PH are usually too much of a gimmick, but they were suitable for this. Pretty catchy, I'm not sure if it was intentional but i reminded me of power metal for some reason.
#12
I like how the chords ended up being a melody within themselves...sounded like triumphant music. Also, I like your tone. The legatto is nice, but I think you used it a bit much. If you are going to do that with your playing, you may want to add in some alternate picked riffs to liven things up (satch does a great job of this)

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#13
thanks for the crit.

i really like the sound you're getting. technique is good. i think you have a winner here. maybe give it a good hook once you get some other instruments involved

very original! keep up the good work!
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