#1
No its not about Jam, its 'A JAM' and its in my profile!

Its a live recording of my band, bow street runners!

C4C as always

peace
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#2
ill listen as i write.

good bass here, toe tappingly funky! the chikka chikka and wah fills from the guitar make a nice airy feeling for the song. im glad your drummer started to vary his beat a little, make the song very interesting. the singer is doing well, singing some nice lines, very appropriate.
id clean up the guitar tone, once the solo section hits.
cool song, great feel. tell your mates they did well!

Listen to some of the stuff in my sig? this is the newest oneGet Bent! (metal) or this acoustic one Blueberry Acoustic thanks!
#3
Man this is some sweet ****! The bass is really sweet and the guitar is to. Your singer goes flat a couple times here and there, but he's still good. Keep it up. Could you crit my other song "the Bottle" Thanks.
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Last edited by Descendent-182 at Feb 29, 2008,
#4
Thanks for the comment on mine.

I like this song! Sweet smooth sound... great recording quality!

I would only criticize the vocal melody a little... it got repetitive.... however, it sounded sorta freestyled? If it was just thought up on the fly, then thats great. If you're going to work on it further, it would be cool to go somewhere a little with the vocals.

The voice is great. Seriously. Nice tone for the style of music.

How did you record this? And is all live instruments?

Lets hear some more!
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#5
all live yeh all live. Melody for vox was just to imitate the bass line, we wanted it to be really rhythm heavy and have the guitars taking lead.
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Hohner 12 String-uber rare

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EHX Big Muff
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Boss DS-1
Blackstar Distortion X
Dunlop Crybaby
Ibanez Delay
Digitech Whammy
#6
What did you use to record it? It sounds pro, really.
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#7
it was done at a studio, but just all live so its kinda studio work, but kinda not if you get me
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Fender USA Strat
Hohner 12 String-uber rare

Fender Silverface Twin

EHX Big Muff
Digitech badmonkey overdrive
Boss DS-1
Blackstar Distortion X
Dunlop Crybaby
Ibanez Delay
Digitech Whammy
#8
any more?
Gibson SG (Heavily modded)
Fender USA Strat
Hohner 12 String-uber rare

Fender Silverface Twin

EHX Big Muff
Digitech badmonkey overdrive
Boss DS-1
Blackstar Distortion X
Dunlop Crybaby
Ibanez Delay
Digitech Whammy
#9
the bass riff on this was sweet! did you play it? i really like your tone! the drums were nice and solid, and the lead playing was very atmospheric. i thought some of the wah work could use some help, but i really liked the vibe those parts gave off. the vocals were pretty decent, but i think you should try for more of a chilled vibe for them...like a soft husky sound. some of the notes were a bit off key.

overall, the instrumentation was great, but the vocals could use a bit of work.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=804237
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