My Main Rig:
☺1998 Gibson Les Paul Studio DC
☺Reverend Rocco(USA)
☺Martin DM
☺Peavey ValveKing 112
☺Dunlop Tortex(1.35Mm) Picks
☺Everly Rockers - .10guage.
☺Martin - .11guage.
☺Too many effects to list.
nice try. you should really be able to play a song fluidly before you ask it to be critiqued. practice slowly first to get it down, then gradually build up speed with a metronome. I would also recommend playing over a backing track once you get it down. you know what to play, it's just a matter of getting it to sound "right"