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Hey guys, sorry about the wait but yeh i finished this little piece. It still has alot of work to be done to it so please crit. C4C just leave me a link and ill get right on to criting bac for u. thanks.

Brand new smile:

Verse 1:
I want to see that smile
On your sweet face
I want to see you smiling at me

I want to make you smile
In our times of grief
I want to see that
Glowing smile I make

Bridge:
So just believe
Ill make u smile
Giving u a brand new smile

Chorus:
All I want to be
Is your brand new smile
That you carry from day to day
In this messed up world

All I want to be
Is your brand new smile
Your brand new smile
Is all I want to be

Verse 2:
Bad things happen
To all good people
Ill be there
To catch you as you fall

With that simple smile
I put on your face
Just by telling you
You are what you are

Bridge:
So just believe
Ill make u smile
Giving u a brand new smile

Chorus:
All I want to be
Is your brand new smile
That you carry from day to day
In this messed up world

Verse 3/ ending:
So just let go
Of all your fear
Release your mind
And go with the flow

You shall be fine
Ill see you at the end
Of the ride of your life
With a brand new smile