#1
Well I honestly think myself that the lyrics to this song could be better, yet I feel like I really accomplished something and that this song got something to it.. I would like to know how you feel..!?

My babys got a blue car
Oh my babys got a blue car
He's taking me out
We sing and shot
In his car, his car, his car, his car

We're driving on a road
Far away from home
Just away and away
All alone

My babys got a blue car
Oh my babys got a blue car
But now he's far away
He drove without me
In his car, his car, his car, his car

He's driving on a road...

I aint got no baby
Oh I aint got no baby
He is driving far
Away in his car
the blues, the blues, the blues, the blues

He's driving on a road...

Got a call from my baby
I got a call from my baby
Now he's outta gas
But he can kiss my ass
I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone

I'm running on a road...

I aint got no money
Oh I aint got no money
I'm hitchhiking back
With my friend Jack
In his car, his car, his car, his car

We're driving on a road...

I got a new baby
Oh I got a new baby
And Jack is very sweet
He's car is very neat
But not blue, not blue, not blue, not blue

Driving on a road...

I miss baby with the blue car
I miss baby with the blue car
I'm gazing at the stars
thinking 'bout them cars
and the blues, the blues, the blues, the blues

driving on a road...

Today I saw a blue car
Yea today I saw a blue car
I think that only maybe
It could be my baby
So I ran, I ran, I ran, I ran

I'm running on a road...

My babys got a blue car
Oh my babys got a blue car
I got my baby back
Forgot about Jack
and his car, his car, his car, his car

We're driving on a road...

My babys got a blue car
Oh my babys got a blue car
He's taking me out
We sing and shot
In his car, his car, his car, his car
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#2
im no expert ut they sound really not good... here i are some i consider good(not writen by me)

The hour of reckoning draws near
Judgment day is here and gone
Sweetly she tucks me into her arms
A liquid embrace to chase the day away
Sedate numb, deaf and dumb
Stumbling into solitude
A clouded judgment day is fueled
Take me under your black wings
Mark my words and remember me
So sweetly she sucks away at my time
So sweetly she draws me nigh
Closer and closer towards never ending sleep
Spin the bottle
Kiss only the bottle
The dark mistress of many, beholden to none
Slips a ring of needles around your arm in an engagement
Eternal engagement
Never consummated
Never consummated
Take me under your black wings
Mark my words and remember me
Destroyer of senses
So take as needed for the pain
Another gray morning dawns across an ashen sky
My sweet demoness beckons me
Ever again and again and again and again
The dark mistress of many, beholden to none
My sweet demoness beckons me
Ever again and again and again and again and again
Take me under your black wings
Jacked up on the taste of self-destruction