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wrote this cause i was bored. no idea why im posting it, but hell, who doesn't love a little criticism every once and a while? not sure if I'll ever use this, but maybe. ha songs are spontaneous, huh?

oh and the way the syllables are and the way the lines are formatted are basically how the singer in my band writes and sings as well, a lot like that guy from the Strokes where he kind of stretches the words i guess? I guess I would say that since some of them are uneven.

pulling yourself down, passed out, a class act
nothing like being the one all the attention is on
but hey, they thought you'd turn out better than that
living to expectations isnt exactly beautiful....


you say im your beautiful zero, beautiful zero
but you refuse to talk at all
your beautiful zero, beautiful zero
but where are you now?


sitting on the sofa, half awake, half dead
nothing like being the one walking the line
really now, you'd think you would be the one to keep your head
hear the sirens screaming 'everything is fine...'


you say im youre beautiful zero, beautiful zero
but you refuse to call me at all
your beautiful zero, beautiful zero
but where are you now?


im the first on the scene, standing in the rain
cant believe your the one who gone now, on the ground
i cant help but hear your words echoing in my head
'come here zero no one else will listen now..."
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